- Mission Viejo, CA
- 95 posts
I looked at this a long time. I really liked how the point of the pencil led the eyes into the doodles on the page. The depth of field was wonderful with that effect. Something bothered me though and not just on the graphic level. There was a class of images in my head resulting from the quotation's and the image of the pencil's polar opposites. The Pencil itself is not "simple" like the text and the mind demand it to be. In other words, lose the globe because the earth is not simple. And there is way too much blue and green. Also this simplicity is mirrored in the lead and the writing on the page.
I hope that helps and is not too harsh. I didn't know how else to say it.